Below is a draft memo that a junior officer has prepared for the sales department. Identify three breaches of standard business‑memo format or style, and rewrite the memo correctly, ensuring the proper heading order, appropriate tone, and correct use of the $\text{cc}$ line.

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To: All Sales Staff
From: Mr. Ade, Sales Manager
Date: 12/09/2024
Subject: New Sales Targets

Hey team,

Just a heads up - we need to push harder on the new product line. Management wants us to hit the numbers by the end of next month. Make sure you're on top of it.

Thanks,
Ade

cc: Regional Manager, Finance
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Below is a draft memo that a junior officer has prepared for the sales department. Identify three breaches of standard business‑memo format or style, and rewrite the memo correctly, ensuring the proper heading order, appropriate tone, and correct use of the $\text{cc}$ line.

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To: All Sales Staff
From: Mr. Ade, Sales Manager
Date: 12/09/2024
Subject: New Sales Targets

Hey team,

Just a heads up - we need to push harder on the new product line. Management wants us to hit the numbers by the end of next month. Make sure you're on top of it.

Thanks,
Ade

cc: Regional Manager, Finance
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The memo should be rewritten as shown in the solution above.

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