In the following passage the narrator shifts between the character's inner thoughts and an external description:

"She walked through the market, the scent of spices mingling with the distant clang of the blacksmith's hammer. He thought, *‘If only I could stay here forever,'* yet the narrative voice slipped, noting, *‘the day would soon end, and the market would empty.'*"

Identify the narrative technique employed and explain its effect on the reader's perception of the character.

Question

In the following passage the narrator shifts between the character's inner thoughts and an external description:

"She walked through the market, the scent of spices mingling with the distant clang of the blacksmith's hammer. He thought, *‘If only I could stay here forever,'* yet the narrative voice slipped, noting, *‘the day would soon end, and the market would empty.'*"

Identify the narrative technique employed and explain its effect on the reader's perception of the character.

Accepted Answer

Free indirect discourse (shifting focalisation); it lets the reader feel the character's inner wish directly while keeping the third‑person narrator's perspective, enhancing empathy and immediacy.

Gce Model Questions Vol1 2024 Literature In English Question 24

Answer Options

About This Question

Master the Exam!